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Nightfall Surrender

Nightfall Surrender You became a part of me as I join in and became a part of you… rolling along with the waves you complete me as I complete you Soul mates lost in forgotten time… subliminally physically the ebb joins the flow in luxurious tides finding fulfilling delights You alone fill my empty spaces, as the waves of the sea fill the voids in the sand, permeating my being with extensiveness as no other has before or since Tick, Tocks the forgotten clock lost in the bliss of the sensual night… pulled under in wave after crashing wave… drowning quite happily in your arms…our crescendo! Then comes the sighs of morning’s arrival… as tears anew stain your empty pillow… still somehow your memory completes me if only at nightfall when remembrances thrive in dreams pleasure All rights reserved by Debra Squyres @ 2013/2/19 Written for: Cyndi MacMillan"s "My Spice Box" members contest

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Date: 3/2/2013 8:30:00 PM
My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, Debra! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing. love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/1/2013 8:05:00 PM
Debra, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 3/1/2013 6:26:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/20/2013 3:09:00 PM
A love filled heart that's so alone. Remembering a love that it'd once known. Requainted souls among the stars. Await return of Venus and Mars.
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Date: 2/20/2013 8:15:00 AM
I see what you mean... Jack
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Date: 2/19/2013 8:12:00 PM
This is a simply brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/19/2013 2:00:00 PM
Debra, it's so lovely written!! - I LOVE IT!! - It would be one winning poem, I do not question it. - Congratulations already! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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