Timeworn

honeybee sucks dry a flower of its nectar as time wither life ~07/01/15 Traditional Haiku #2 contest Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 7/4/2015 8:06:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Congrats Abdul

Date: 7/2/2015 11:44:00 PM

Lovely, depp Haiku. Congratulations, Abdul. Regards, Viv

Date: 7/2/2015 11:06:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome winning haiku Abdul!

Date: 7/2/2015 10:40:00 PM

Congrats to you, Abdul. Nice seeing this one again.

Date: 7/2/2015 7:32:00 PM

Congrats on you win!

Date: 7/2/2015 6:30:00 PM

Nice write, Abdul, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

Date: 7/2/2015 6:23:00 PM

nice imagery the first two lines are great Abdul congrats on placing hugs

Date: 7/2/2015 6:00:00 PM

Abdul, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Date: 7/1/2015 11:32:00 PM

oh yes, I LIKE this . Very haiku-ish!

Date: 6/30/2015 9:56:00 AM

Abdul, beautiful haiku 7 and thanks for visiting my death poem

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2015 11:43:00 AM

Thanks BW.

Date: 6/29/2015 7:00:00 PM

I think Shadow will approve. Great haiku!

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2015 11:42:00 AM

Thanks Richard. You are a true pal.