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Night Sky-Lost

I wonder why i cant reach the sky Why i cant conquer my thoughts Can i ever complete the missing puzzles? Under this Starry Sky The roaring winds wakes me up It makes my heart shiver That wind encourage me to rise up But can i ever win against my fear? My fear keep engulfing me Can i maintain my heart pure? Can i keep living without a doubts? Can i ever gain a power to conquer my thoughts? I wish i can be one of the stars So when the night falls I'll light up the sky A sky where everyone can live without a doubts and fears

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 9:33:00 PM

Nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 9:38:00 PM

Hope to see you post this year.... 2016

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2015 2:55:00 AM

Karen, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 12/24/2015 1:54:00 AM

Karen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Old Man Emu

Date: 12/23/2015 10:34:00 PM

Nice poem Karen, keep them coming Cheers Craig

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 12/23/2015 7:42:00 AM

Great first post! :)