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night of desire wraps us in soft rainfall quenching mouths’ hunger… as breaths naked, gush jealous stars peep silently Andrea Dietrich’s Get Romantic Visual # 2 3/4/2015

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Date: 3/11/2015 5:28:00 PM
Nice write to go with the picture, grats on your win
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:10:00 AM
Nette, huli man daw at magaling...haha. I was so sure I have posted a congrats note on here...glitch? So, late though I maybe... Congratulations on your win Nette! Love this! Hugs! :)
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Date: 3/8/2015 10:12:00 PM
Wow Nette. This is off the charts for HOT! I didn't think anyone could top the photo but you managed it! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/8/2015 6:16:00 PM
NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/8/2015 11:52:00 AM
WOW, Nette,, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:00:00 PM
Jealous stars...I love this,nette! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2015 6:42:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice win, Nette. I love your imagery and interpretation of this visual. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations nette, a well layered poem that connects well with visual 2
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations Nette! I love the gorgeous imagery! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:06:00 AM
Congrats on the win Nette, sensuously written.
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:41:00 AM
gabi ng pagnanais - mahusay na Tanka>Pagbati> Congratulations nette on your win>>rajat
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:07:00 AM
2nd and lazt line are my faves! congratz!
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Date: 3/7/2015 4:53:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:40:00 AM
Wow...jealous stars! You captured the desire and passion of the picture perfectly, Nette. Congrats!! I'm honored to share 2nd place with you...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/6/2015 11:32:00 PM
Nette, of all the rain poems, this one for me captures best the essence of this picture. Those stars ought to be jealous. Just look at that guy she gets to kiss!! Congrats on a great win.
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Date: 3/6/2015 5:50:00 AM
It's natural that gushing jealous stars peep silently in such a loving way. Extreme beauty is seen here. 7+ i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:14:00 AM
Yes, this is the star view, which creates a wonderful sense of privacy. Love, daver
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Date: 3/5/2015 5:18:00 AM
Wonderful tanka Nette...I like the 2nd line....best wishes
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:21:00 PM
Whoa!! Reads like a winner.. Way to go...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:15:00 PM
Love the images through your words Princess. So few, tell so much. Good luck in the contest Princess, hugs, James :) :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:12:00 PM
sensual and romantic Nette - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:00:00 PM
Where do I start..this is sweet passion.The choice of words is amazing, " mouths' hunger, "desire wraps us " but my fav is the last line ".And I'll just finish this comment with another Wow, Nette
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:26:00 PM
- Romantic & Beautiful - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:15:00 PM
very sensual and romantic nette....hugs Tim
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