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December Dawn ---Nightime Musings

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My eyes wander, where window gazing, finds the crescent moon rifting the darkness, and against it's light a magnolia branch is stenciled, black and keen Three stars are tangled in the topmost bough... And because deep loveliness is there, I turn to you... The profile on the pillow is that boy from long ago I love watching you, lashes fluttering, and an almost smile What are you dreaming, my love? How could one explain That love like this exists Before coffee, on a December dawn, in a shadowed room?
_______________________________________________________________ Contest: Nightime Musings.....sponsored by FJ Thomas

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/3/2016 9:19:00 AM
Carrie, what a truly beautiful write. It has a very personal and dreamy feel to it.
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Date: 12/31/2015 3:45:00 PM
Enchanting, so enchanting - I loved it ... CayCay
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:03:00 PM
CARRIE... NICE WIN...SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2015 1:15:00 AM
Loved ur very sweet images Carrie.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/28/2015 8:48:00 PM
Love the image of the stenciled magnolia branch. A beautiful intimate moment forever stenciled upon our minds. Congratulations, SuZ
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Date: 12/28/2015 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this incredible poem!
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Date: 12/28/2015 7:23:00 PM
Simply lovely, Carrie, well done. And all the best for 2016 to you and yours. Viv x
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Date: 12/28/2015 4:46:00 PM
so beautiful. A very well deserved win, Carrie. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/28/2015 4:40:00 PM
A lovely poem, Carrie. So full of the mystery that defines love. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/28/2015 3:33:00 PM
Those "LUCKY ME" moments Carrie. Congrats on your placement
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Date: 12/28/2015 2:11:00 PM
This is a delight to read, Carrie! Sweet musing at dawn of day! ~ Congratulations on a most worthy win. ~ Wishing you all the best for 2016. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/28/2015 1:04:00 PM
Wow Carrie this is so beautiful congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2012 5:33:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 6/8/2012 8:47:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your win with this beautiful poem! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/8/2012 8:09:00 PM
You framed a poetic scene just from looking outside your morning window! Congrats on this win, Carrie! WOW! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/8/2012 5:48:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Great job. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/8/2012 12:13:00 PM
Very nice Carrie! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 6/8/2012 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2012 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie xx
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Date: 6/8/2012 4:04:00 AM
this is very lovely! congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/8/2012 3:49:00 AM
carrie congrats on your win, very romantic..David
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Date: 6/5/2012 7:02:00 PM
This is a remarkable write my friend! I really enjoyed this fine poem that you have written! What a marvelous and delightful write! Great Work!!
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