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night creeps steadily
adorned in dark velvet cape…
watching as men sleep

crickets sound their shrill
bullfrogs play tuba and base…
shooting stars display

day rolls in bright-bold
night in surrender recedes…
rays of gold invade

Annalise Brigham
Note:  For Linda Marie's "Hodgepodge Haiku Trio" Contest
*7th Place

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  1. Date: 2/8/2012 11:03:00 AM
    Thanks for stopping by, Annalise. I am out of town again helping a sick friend. My computer at home died and I bought a new one that I'll install when I get home in a couple weeks. BTW Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest! Love you, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 5:13:00 AM
    Annalise, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 4:29:00 AM
    wow. very beautiful. love it. contratulations on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 2:41:00 AM
    Good one!Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Annalise! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:54:00 AM
    Annalise what can I say, you have a unique way of folding it together, I believe rays of gold invade you here, none else can I say more but congrats. my dear, love,vie

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 1:11:00 AM
    Annalise congrats on your win, "bullfrogs play tuba" excellent..David

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 4:04:00 PM
    I love the personification and imagery or yours, annalise. Congrats on your win with this great set.

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Annalise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:34:00 PM
    congrats Annalise on sweet success in my contest.. a lovely entry..thankxxx luv..

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 1:30:00 PM
    Lovely haiku, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 1/27/2012 5:37:00 AM
    A full circle delight, Annalise. HOw'd u do it?...Magical words weaved in this winning write. Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 11:21:00 PM
    fine imagery.. lovely it much, jag

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 5:58:00 PM
    I like the surrender of night to day at the end there. Sure to score!!

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:23:00 PM
    Exquisite imagery, dear Annalise. I love the way you worked in the crickets and bullfrogs. Very enjoyable read and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Did you get my regular email? I have been trying to call you, but the number I have for you is out of order. Hope you'll send me the right number! Best wishes for success with this lovely piece. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Like it alot Annalise, good luck in the contest !! oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 4:09:00 PM
    Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Winner for sure..Those tree frogs have started their chorus already here where I live..Sara

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 8:27:00 AM
    shimmering write so gloriously scribed!... a winning haiku string!... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 2:22:00 AM
    Annalise great entry, love them, but adore the second one, good luck..David

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 9:40:00 PM
    I love your trio. Best of luck in the contest! Blessings, Rhonda :)