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Night, Sublime

An owl’s hoot Its lone night-time salute Echoes eerily from the dark trees I hear the comforting sounds of the gentle breeze Whistling outside the house like an old woman’s wheeze Far off, the village clock strikes one time The owl hoots at its chime Night, sublime Jack Horne, 19th August, for Nette’s Night Melody contest

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Date: 9/4/2012 12:41:00 PM
Fantastic write, I just love it. Congrats. :) Tanya
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Date: 9/1/2012 10:56:00 AM
Hi Jack, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-par par-what a HUIT :-) :-) contest... I love your entry... always~ PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Night Melody" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2012 12:29:00 PM
Awesome verse! You are a well deserved winner...Congratulations! Cynthia
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Date: 8/29/2012 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations Jack...
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Date: 8/28/2012 8:14:00 PM
Well done on our well-deserved top placement. Indeed a sublime poem. :)
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Delysia Hendricks
Date: 8/28/2012 8:15:00 PM
Please pardon the typo. I meant "your" not "our". lol
Date: 8/28/2012 7:47:00 PM
this got a wow from me the FIRST time and I will say it again. WOW, big congrats on your top place win.
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Date: 8/28/2012 1:56:00 PM
Excellent write jack!Congrats on the big win!
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Date: 8/28/2012 1:30:00 PM
Superb, Jack...even though the form requires an exact syllable count it flows with ease...congratulations - Tim
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Date: 8/28/2012 6:20:00 AM
tender is your night, jack... defining personification!.. cheers to you for your top win!..:)
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Date: 8/28/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations Jack a well deserved win here xx
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Date: 8/28/2012 5:50:00 AM
Hi Jack, you paint a peaceful picture, well done. Congrats on your first place win. Lee
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Date: 8/28/2012 4:50:00 AM
NIce scene u painted here, Jack...a winning write for my dear friend! You write so well about evening..is it your fav time of the day? Congrats. gwendolen
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Date: 8/21/2012 9:58:00 PM
brilliant composition Jack.. luv the imagery displayed and the ambiance expressed.. best of luck luv..
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Date: 8/20/2012 10:56:00 AM
good job!!!
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Date: 8/20/2012 9:13:00 AM
It's all here Jack, the very best of everything thats poetry. just love what i've read. thanks, it's a honour to view this.
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Date: 8/19/2012 1:23:00 PM
Oh...this is good - beautiful, Jack.....a winner in contest - Very well rhyme poem !! - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)
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Date: 8/19/2012 12:56:00 PM
Beautiful rhyme & imagery... Good luck in the contest... Terry
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Date: 8/19/2012 12:48:00 PM
Great descriptive work that tells of an interesting eve..A hoot owl is not so bad but a screech owl is a scary sounding bird...Thanks for stopping by my work..My husband had Lyme disease as well as our oldest grandson..My husband was sick for a year before the doctors found out what it was..The grandson got sick and the antibiotic did not get him well..Then our daughter heard on the radio about testing at the health department if a person had had certain symptoms so she took the grandson..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2012 12:50:00 PM
He tested positive or the illness..I convinced my husband to go also and he tested positive..He had to take antibiotics twice for fourteen days before he finally tested negative.It was an awful year for him..He ran high fevers off and on a very long time..Sara
Date: 8/19/2012 12:23:00 PM
You did quite awesome for this contest Jack!! Very impressive write my friend! I really love this very awesome poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/19/2012 11:27:00 AM
Jack, you are right on the money with this one.. Love the title too! Lfde Wilma
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Date: 8/19/2012 11:11:00 AM
wow, you have already done Nette's challenge??? my gosh, you are always right on it, Jack. Impressive you are, and a GREAT poem.
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:02:00 AM
This will go far dear friend xx
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:42:00 AM
Jack, I love this image of the owl waiting for the clock, just knockout, good luck...David
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