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Niagara River-Side Walk

churning and darting changing from blonde to brunette do calisthenics +++ August 26, 2014 Form: Haiku

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:08:00 AM

STUNNING

Len Gasun

Date: 9/8/2014 9:43:00 AM

A very awesome haiku with a very delightful image my dear friend Dr. Ram. I love it. It makes me want to see this place someday:))). Thanks for sharing and the rich vicarious experience! Many warm congratulations on your win! Big sweet hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/7/2014 11:45:00 PM

Wonderful and Intriguing piece..Great write,Dr.Ram..Congrats on your well deserved win...Thanks for visiting my page...

Richard Ferry

Date: 9/7/2014 10:43:00 AM

Congrats,,,to you as well

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 4:35:00 AM

- Dr. Ram, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2014 10:58:00 PM

quite an interesting one. A metaphor I believe!! Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/6/2014 10:42:00 AM

I have been to the falls often and love the way you have portrayed them in this lovely Haiku. Congratulations Dr. Mehta.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 7:07:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 11:41:00 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning haiku Dr Ram!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:24:00 PM

Dr Ram:). Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

James Fraser

Date: 8/31/2014 9:49:00 AM

Quirky Haiku Dr. Ram, nice one :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/27/2014 6:12:00 PM

good humour Ram gl in contest hugs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/26/2014 5:18:00 PM

I have to see Niagara, I haven't? Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 8/26/2014 3:01:00 PM

Very clever. Nice Haiku!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/26/2014 1:47:00 PM

greart entry. good luck in the contest my friend.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 8/26/2014 11:53:00 AM

Good afternoon Dr. Mehta, This is a very clever haiku. Very imaginative with a lot of cool fun images. There is a lot going on in this. The hair change analogy is perfect. Great job. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2014 11:37:00 AM

wonderful take on the theme Dr Mehta:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/26/2014 10:28:00 AM

Brilliant take Dr Ram!