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A CORNISH SONNET Fireworks explosions and toasts of good cheer, celebrate with kisses at midnight's stroke. Joyous welcome of another New Year, couples all dressed up and drinking champagne. Wife at my side, I'm a lucky old bloke, walking the beach while the world goes insane. We needed a reason to celebrate in a secluded place where we could think. So we chose an island to contemplate what life might hold for us in the new year. Marriage in shambles, nearly on the brink of losing all the love that we hold dear. Fireworks explosions, and toasts of good cheer. We needed a reason to celebrate. December 21st 2015 Cornish Sonnet Contest Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 1/12/2016 11:35:00 PM
Hi Lin, nice to see your HM... Hugs ** SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 4:41:00 PM
Amazing Cornish Sonnets landed upon this list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, and Congrats to you on yours, too.
Date: 1/12/2016 1:48:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet Lin.. new year celebrations.. gala time indeed.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 1/12/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thanks, Upma, and congratulations back to you.
Date: 1/12/2016 12:14:00 AM
Love the way that Marital Piano drops from a great height into your parade in this piece, Lin, certainly different. Well done on coping with this, in my humble opinion, tricky form. Viv x
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Ronald.
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Date: 1/12/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you very much, Viv. I thought yours was wonderful!
Date: 12/21/2015 8:03:00 AM
I enjoyed this Lin - I haven't read the contest details, but I know I liked the poem. All the best to you ... CayCay
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Date: 12/21/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay. It's a challenge...you can do it, I'm sure.

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