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Never To Be - Love

you belong to him wanting what I cannot have brings beautiful hurt

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Carrie Richards

Date: 1/25/2014 9:57:00 AM

This one brings an ouchie to my heart!! Oh dear.....beautiful hurt is the worst kind!! Well done, my friend!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/25/2014 8:27:00 AM

OH no, your are writing about me! lol. Good one and congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2014 7:59:00 AM

- Tim - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2014 8:20:00 PM

This one reminded me of that old rock song. Hurts so good!!! Nice one, Tim. Congrats on the win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2014 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Nothing But Love, Tim

Date: 4/25/2010 7:56:00 PM

The emotion comes through your words on this one. Lost love does bring pain. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a good week. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/22/2010 5:11:00 AM

Friends with benefits always hurt you the most , so much truth in so few words, wonderful write!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2010 2:06:00 PM

ahhh the pain....why are joy and pain so connected? Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/2/2010 5:24:00 PM

awwwww it seems it's "easier?" to want something we can't have? I'm sure if you wish to you will find a dear one soon! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2009 9:55:00 AM

I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Tim. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 12/27/2009 10:57:00 PM

Bravo Tim, Great Senryu. "HAPPY NEW YEAR. Sincerely, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2009 10:30:00 PM

I enjoyed this senryu from you! andrea

Michael Harman

Date: 12/27/2009 7:29:00 PM

Hmm i would normally complain that it is so short, But i felt it, yay, nice,,,