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Necklace-Less

In a Mall, Ninjas looked for necklaces Suddenly predators attacked wreckless There followed grim fight Both used their utmost might Sharpened swords making both of them neck-less
=============================== Syllable count 10/10/6/6/10 (Followed is three syllabic according to PS Counter) Eight Place win in: Dr.Ram Mehta

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Date: 11/17/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Ninja Limerick" poem Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2011 12:39:00 AM
oooh, I love that play on words with neck-less.good thinking! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/11/2011 8:56:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on a super win for this wonderful Limerick so very creative my friend..luv..
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Date: 11/11/2011 8:30:00 AM
A very clever play on words Dr Ram. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/11/2011 12:57:00 AM
DR RAM~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, for your super ninja entry. Thank you for supporting my Sneaky Ninja contest* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/10/2011 7:46:00 PM
Well i suppose you could say this is another angle on "necking" Dr Ram, hovever just can't see it becoming as attractive as its predecessor..! HA HA also hope it gets a win in the contest..
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Date: 11/9/2011 2:08:00 PM
Oooh, that's a frightening thought. Enjoyed the humor, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in PD's Ninja contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:49:00 AM
lol great limerick
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Date: 11/9/2011 8:26:00 AM
I am glad that they only brandished words, and not the traditional accoutrements of neck lacing! A spiffy diddy! Enjoyed your tickling tirade!
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Date: 11/9/2011 6:36:00 AM
intrigue in the mall! Great write! enjoyed reading your poem!---Lorii
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Date: 11/9/2011 6:01:00 AM
A moving and very captivating read! You did marvels with your thoughts and pen! Thank you for sharing And May God Bless!
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