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Below is the poem entitled NAIVE which was written by poet Jade Celeste. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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N   ever believes people can be back stabbers
A   ppeals for honesty where none exists
I    nvites in without a background check
V   ulnerable when being openhearted   
E   xpects people to reciprocate in kind

That’s who I am…..

For Andrea's Acrostic Contest
September 7, 2013

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:57:00 PM
    Hi Sweet Eileen, congratulations with your awesome Acrostic poem *** LOVE ***LINDA

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 4:05:00 PM
    Eileen,, Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Nice & congrats Eileen!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 7:34:00 AM
    We all are from time to time..this is a great poem and congrats to you. BG

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Well done Eileen. Love the creativity. Congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 8:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your grand win Eileen!

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 8:49:00 AM
    You know all of that is wonderful, yet we must stop being disappointed when all does not turn out as we 'primed the pump/ in our minds!' expected it to, each person walks a life long road to find their true self! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:00:00 AM
    I think we all can be naïve at times, but life teaches us through lessons...good one, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 6:23:00 AM
    so much truth in your write Eileen great acrostic congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 4:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:41:00 AM
    wow, putting that last little line made it so personal. I hardly think you are naive, though , like many of us, you are trusting, and I think we all need to be that way. Otherwise, how could we ever learn to trust. GREAT acrostic, Eileen, and congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 3:25:00 AM
    you are special always Congrats on your win.Morgan

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 11:21:00 PM
    Wonderful acrostic, excellent description. Great write.

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 10:36:00 PM
    It seems to me that you are one of the few good people left in this world. Good poem

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/9/2013 7:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry are a dear for sayiing that....Bless you....
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Naive; I can relate to this. I used to be naive - not anymore. Great for the contest..... lucilla

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/8/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, we do learn along the way, don't we. It's called self preservation! I know, my dear. I'm glad you have learned to cope! Hugs!
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:17:00 AM
    I feel this piece deeply. It's those kind of experiences felt when one wears their heart on their sleeve. Wonderful statements!

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/8/2013 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, is there a way to get the heart back where it belongs, Drake! :) Give me pointers! Thanks for the visit! :)
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 7:58:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading all the responses. As for me I will choose not to harden my skin. I will maintain my innocence, I will accept that I will feel hurt. I will love myself and others through that hurt until my heart will sing praises to my heavenly father who has made us all. You have done a great job bringing out people's emotions Eileen. That is art at it's best. Hugs Rick.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/8/2013 3:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is wonderful, Richard. I'm glad that you have the grace to do that. I always WISH that I could, but I wind up being the softie that I am! Art at it's best! I'm thrilled! Lovely testament to your faith...
  1. Date: 9/8/2013 12:01:00 AM
    Ah, yes, that describes me at times. Awesome acrostic! Always, Laura

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/8/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Laura. Nice to have a visit from you! :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:53:00 PM
    I have to fave this one, because it's who I am too, I believe most open hearted people are, We'll be naïve sisters : ) Awesome acrostic Eileen! Hugs

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/7/2013 11:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! Thanks, my dear Cecilia. Being faved by you is a sweet honor! :) privilege to call you a soul sister! Hugs!
  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:33:00 PM
    nice poem... I love the creativity in this write... keep the beauty in your heart... signed The Blue Poet...

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/7/2013 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chris...FINALLY, a visit from you! Lovely to see you here! I will try to take your advice. I really like the depth of emotions you portray in your work! Keep it up, Mr Blue Poet! :)