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My Walmart Moment

my empty car idles as I shop. . . Why aren’t my keys with me? (This happened to me this year on Black Friday. Lucky for me, I had not locked the car!!) For Richard Lamoureux's QuestionKu Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 5/16/2015 11:30:00 AM
    this does not read like a haiku. LOL, so you forgot to mark it as a questionku. :) SKAT

  1. Date: 12/29/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Wife and I had a moment where we misplaced our car keys in Walmart. 2 hours later it was return to us. Now on we keep the keys real close to us.

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Is this a senior moment? I think not, enjoyed your haiku, xxx

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 7:11:00 PM
    Kudos to you! I can relate to this situation. I used to lock my keys in the car.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:29:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Andrea! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 7:37:00 AM
    I hope you got some great bargains. Thanks for participating in my contest.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 5:11:00 AM
    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:23:00 AM
    Only you Andy , congrats on your win love xx

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:03:00 PM
    I guess retirement has kept me busier than I thought. I enjoyed the poem though. I had a friend in college that left his car idling in the parking lot of the library for an hour an a half before he remembered it. It was still running! We went to school at a pretty laid back place and not a soul touched it. Try that nowadays!! Thanks for checking in. I'll try to write a bit when I can. Thanks, RAY

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:51:00 PM
    That much of a hurry to get the bargins at the stores ha ha. Lucky you did not lock the doors but it can happen to any of us. Did not go out that day but our sales are crappy up here so not really worth going out for. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 4:48:00 PM
    Sounds like you had a fortunate day Andrea; I like reading everyday events Its where it all comes from..!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:58:00 PM
    I had moments like that. Lucky no one took the car Thanks for sharing the story. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 12:31:00 PM
    in a rush to buy all the things you can get before everyone else..? lol that's understandable.but sadly ): at least you noticed.. haha, i was joking about what i said on your christmas poem. sorry maybe i shouldn't joke around on here xD and actually, that poem i wrote was meant for one guy, your comment made me think about does sound kind of bad..i think i'll change it to "A Guy Friend" it won't send out the wrong idea.~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:25:00 AM
    or lost it to a car thief.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 1:20:00 PM
    don't tell hubby.

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:59:00 AM
    I know the feeling so well dear..can relate.Usually they re in my pocket or hands whilst im

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 12:46:00 AM
    Andrea I still think women are the best drivers..good luck...David

    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 12/6/2012 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    dave your killing me.
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 12/6/2012 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wish my husband could agree dav.I never had a car accident but.he still.thinks we re completely Opeless:)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:16:00 PM
    Andrea, i did not know you had Walmart's in your area... you are from Canada right... anyways, I leave my keys in my cars.. because I am too lazy to look for them when i get out if the store... i am happy no one took your car.. PD

    poet Avatar kash poet
    Date: 12/6/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Not from Canada,she is from INDIA:)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Hi Andrea,,, wow.... lol....i love leaving my key in my car on purpose ..i'm hate looking for them in the bottom of my purse... hope to see you on the winners list..pd

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 8:01:00 AM
    I have given up driving since I moved to Manhattan. When I did have f Ford Taurus I sometimes forgot where I parked it! Chanukah is an ancient holdiay which lasts 8 days. Best of the season to you and yours Matthew Anish