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My Valentine Gift - 1st One

She blushes in awe Desiring nothing more than To accept my gift That of which I humbly give My heart, of love, beating true Russell Sivey Original thought for an entry into Andrea Dietrich's contest. Made another poem to enter into contest! This ones good, just wanted a better one for contest!

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/5/2012 2:12:00 PM

this is such a sweet tanka, nothing more romantic than to give your heart...

Jack Horne

Date: 2/5/2012 1:03:00 PM

Yes, I think this is very good, Russell - I look forward to reading the second one that you preferred

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/5/2012 4:02:00 AM

a most intangible gift, russell... a poetic delight that will climb up the charts..:) hugggs!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 2/5/2012 3:39:00 AM

and just like thee good ole' Faithful Clock works,,,so is the promptitude of yir New Poem-age! Feliz de Valentine amigo!~

Don Johnson

Date: 2/4/2012 10:05:00 PM

love it mate ...just first rate ... as good as or better more... good poetry 4 sure!