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My Tethered Soul

My soul is a wanderer, My mind an amazing maze, No matter how far I wander I stagger back within my gaze-- As a tethered horse graze! 06/15/15 For "Five lines / Metaphors & Simile" contest by Sara Kendrick

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Jill Spagnola

Date: 7/7/2015 1:25:00 PM

Extreme beauty in both form and verse, jill

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2015 10:45:00 PM

:) Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/30/2015 9:59:00 PM

Abdul, I just stopped by to say congratulations on getting 1st place in the contest. Excellent job! :-) Alexis

Lee Carter

Date: 6/30/2015 12:12:00 AM

Congrats love your lines : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 10:33:00 PM

Hi, Abdul. Glad to see this one here, and congrats for your win.

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2015 9:30:00 AM

I am glad you are glad. Thanks.

Mohamed Adel

Date: 6/29/2015 7:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win,Abdul Malik, thoughtful poem :)

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thanks buddy.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/29/2015 6:30:00 PM

Abdul, congratulations on your win, a 7 . I do real relate. Hugs eve

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2015 9:29:00 AM

Thanks Eve. Appreciate much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/29/2015 5:26:00 PM

Thanks for this wonderful entry in my contest..I enjoyed reading it ..Congrats on your win..Sara

Abdul Malik
Date: 6/30/2015 9:28:00 AM

Wow, Sara! I really appreciate that. I knew I had something there. Thanks for confirming it for me.