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My Spirit

My spirit stays strong, even through the darkest of times.
Suddenly it was taken away. Pleading and begging him to get off me. Invisible my cries went for years. Ripped out from underneath me, my childhood was stolen. Isolated scared and guilt ridden. Taking away apart of me forever in an instant.
Cory long 9-4-2011 Write it deep and dramatic, Please contest.

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Date: 9/9/2011 6:52:00 PM
Amazing work and win for you..... I got home today and there at my door was your Book!!!! Excellent!!!!! I love it and am so proud of you for doing it....best wish for much more success in the future.. love Michael
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Date: 9/9/2011 9:49:00 AM
Many congrats on all your wins, Cory : )
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Date: 9/8/2011 7:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Cory!
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Date: 9/8/2011 2:29:00 PM
cheers to you for a top win, russel.. so compelling! ;) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/8/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Constance La France's "Write It Deep And Dramatic, Please contest Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Cory with this worthy piece, the imagery is impressive. Well done
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Date: 9/8/2011 3:53:00 AM
hey Cory congrats on your truly fantastic win..David
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:08:00 AM
oops, it was deep and dramatic,but also yours was dark!!!
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:07:00 AM
c ongratulations, Cory, you got it BOTH dark and deep!!
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:12:00 AM
Cory, it is both deep and dramatic, and I hope not true. Take care Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:50:00 PM
Well, she asked for deep and dramatic and that's what you gave her. Well written. Congratulations Cory
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance.cory
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:01:00 PM
CONGRATS CORY ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH THIS ALLURING ACROSTIC PIECE MY FRIEND..LUV..
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win Cory luv..its an honour to share a 1st place with you xxx
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:15:00 PM
I hope not you but a topic about which that you have written..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in a contest..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:23:00 PM
Cory-Excellent! Congrats. to you!
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:29:00 AM
Well written , am stuck for words to express how I feel.
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:09:00 PM
Soup mail in a moment ~~
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:58:00 AM
Great words! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:37:00 AM
hey Cory, shouldn't there be a line between 4 and 5,, David
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Date: 9/5/2011 3:22:00 AM
Very nice cory...but it seems you missed the 2nd line here which should strat with'Y'....
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