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My Sister, My Best Friend

You were supposed to be my first best friend We were to look out for one another I tried to always be there when things got rough And though we grew up in the same home You took a path separate from mine We spoke less and less over the years I tried to extend a hand and do what was right But I lost you my sister and my first best friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/7/2011 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Carol! This one was the hardest to write. It always brings tears to my eyes.
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Renee. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta - I'm attempting to spread my creative wings. Poetry isn't my forte.
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Date: 2/24/2011 4:52:00 PM
Sentimental and emotional write on my sister, my best friend, Renee
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Date: 2/24/2011 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Carol!
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:39:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Renee. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2011 7:37:00 PM
Thank you, Caryl :)
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Date: 2/23/2011 4:58:00 PM
A very moving write. I can relate to your words. Caryl
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