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My Silent Screams

Screaming so quietly. Suffering silently. walking around with a smile on my face. But my insides covered in mace. crying in pain but only hoping in vain.

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Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/17/2012 11:43:00 AM

What a heart-rending write, Jasmine. The last line is killing. You are young and yet you are gifted with such a high degree of sensitivity. I am glad I read you today. What a tremendous tribute you have paid to my poem I Love You. Jasmine, You have turned me from nobody to somebody. I appreciate your highly uplifting comments. You are spoiling me. -Mohammad .

Jasmine Murphy
Date: 1/17/2012 4:36:00 PM

its not spoilong when you deserve such encouragement haha. writing has been my way of expression and i can see it has done much for you too. hope all is well:) -jasmine

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/8/2012 10:26:00 AM

I think we all have moments of silent screams where the face wears a mask and no one can see our tourment. Wonderful poem describing a persons pain. God Bless Phyl