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My Saddest Christmas..12/27/'97 Pt. Ii

Pt. II Instead she posed a million questions to me about how we really were It was only two days later, he said, she awoke as usual, at dawn She made enough breakfast for everyone; Mama, never tiring, no complaints By late afternoon as they sat on the porch reminiscing, sharing laughter and games Said she wasn’t feeling very well and she was going to take a nap Later, someone went in to check on her because they’d thought they’d heard her call Sure enough she was calling out, but not the names of any alive Her words they heard were: “Wilfred! Gloria, is that you?” Puzzled, the others were quickly called to Mama’s side As they gathered around her bed that day and tried to nudge her awake She seemed to be engaged in silent conversation with smiles and nods of her head With her eyes which seemed to be focused elsewhere beyond this realm, As always her soft eyes, welled up with tears, still beautiful after all this time They somehow knew that she was going fast, and there was nothing they could do “Wilfred” was Papa’s middle name; the only name she’d called him, since they met! “Gloria” was my older sister who had gone home about seven years before Three days after Papa’s Birthday, on December 27, 1997, we believe he came to stand by her bed That was the saddest Christmas I have ever had! Note: By Audrey Carey Submitted To: “The Saddest Christmas, Ever” Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France, ~A Rambling Poet ~

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Date: 12/10/2010 7:52:00 PM
Audrey, this makes me very curious to know about that day she died and how soon after you heard her saying her husband's name that she passed away . I think it would be sad, but also glorous to know that she had passed right on over into his arms. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/19/2010 2:58:00 PM
A most moving write, Audrey, and a beautiful story of "perfect" transition. Would that all of our transitions would be as peaceful and effortless.
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Date: 11/16/2010 5:23:00 AM
Oh!!! I feel your pain my dear sis. I feel the tightening on my heart, but look at it this way, she had made all the preparation for her family to have a wonderful Christmas then she quietly slipped away to rest. To the very last she had been a woman of virtue, making sure her household was cared for. God rest her soul. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/15/2010 11:10:00 PM
A calling from our Creator, one could never tell when and how. I am sure your mother have really put you all in unity and at peace before leaving this world, we will always remember our mother in any occasion most especially this Christmas time, lovely to read this one, Audrey and good luck to this contest. Appreciate always your kind comment to my poem. (^_^)Noel.
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