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My Redhead - dictionary fun contest

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My Redhead - dictionary fun contest

Rehearsing my lines with passion
And yearning for her affection
A redhead flame, I was keen to meet
Desiring a meaningful relationship
My inner soul would cherish the touch of her tender lips
And the taste of salt from a shared packet of chips
But each attempt to connect was a struggle
Like that of a soldier fighting another’s battle
The fear of scorn is courtship’s doom
But soldiering on might see love bloom
Despite the abomination of rejection, I was undeterred
Cupid’s bamboozle, I’d outwit and find my love

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:10:00 AM
    Of course, as a redhead, i HAD to read this... You know, we as women, feel the fear that men will never be attracted to us--we don't think about the fear of rejection--for the one who takes the first step braves the fear of rejection.... thanks for the great peak into the male heart...

    Anderson-Throop Avatar Victoria Anderson-Throop
    Date: 12/15/2012 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    whoops...wrong peak...peek.... that is what i get for being in a hurry...sorry..
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations Sumit....Seren

    Majumdar Avatar Sumit Majumdar
    Date: 12/11/2012 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you but why? I neither landed the redhead (they don't exist here) nor are the results out and so I am a bit mystified.
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your HM Sumit xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 1:07:00 AM
    Lovely write Sumit! In search of affection one must be prepared for challenge. Well done!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:41:00 PM
    Sumit... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:35:00 PM
    enjoyed your poetry today Rose xxx

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:15:00 AM
    HOpe you did!..some great rhymes. BG

    Majumdar Avatar Sumit Majumdar
    Date: 12/4/2012 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No redheads this part of the world dear, but I am allowed to dream!