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My Poetic Flowers

After all the deaths I just stopped talking, A young girl grief-stricken; And some wondered if I was listening, Write, write it, said grandma in the kitchen. She gave me a journal, That day a poet was born inside me; My words now eternal, Poetry is my sweet butterfly set free . . . I can let go of all the pain in words, All the sad weeping tears; My poems drifting with the soaring birds, So many written over all these years. With a beautiful pen, I can take you to a place of sorrow; Paint a scene now and then, My poetic flowers with love, will grow . . . _____________________ May 21, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/My Poetic Flowers Copyright Protected, ID 05-676-017-21 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Poet's Worth sponsor, FJ Thomas, Judged 2015 First Place

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Date: 6/12/2015 7:53:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your Poet's Worth win. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/12/2015 7:08:00 PM
Broken, Nice to see this one on Flo's winning list. Congratulations, thanks for sharing your thoughts on A Poet's Worth. Love LINDA
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Date: 5/25/2015 6:47:00 PM
Awesome! One of the more feeling poems I have read!!
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:32:00 AM
A moving write, this shows the power of poetry in a poet's life and has touched me deeply. A 7 for you, Broken. Blessings for the contest! HUgs! Kim
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:26:00 AM
Line four you need a comma after "Write, write it,"said grandma in the kitchen. I think you have expressed yourself well with this piece Constance, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/22/2015 11:10:00 PM
Excellent write Broken wings, all true, poetry has mysterious power....good luck in the contest........Afolabi.
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Date: 5/22/2015 12:10:00 AM
Wonderful advice and you have taken that advice to heart and are soaring indeed, Constance. Flo will love this. She does not seem to like my poetry, but I know she will like this one!
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Date: 5/21/2015 5:51:00 PM
What a wonderful grandma! She gave you a purpose and a direction to follow. She gave you a journal to let the grief out. Best to you in the contest. Darlene
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Date: 5/21/2015 5:48:00 PM
I love this beautiful piece. Thank God for poets! I glad I stopped to view the 7+ piece. - Alexis
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Date: 5/21/2015 4:40:00 PM
B.W., a write worth of a win a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 5/21/2015 4:22:00 PM
Oh Broken Wings this is beautiful yet so sad I would love to do a contest to find out why people started writing but I wonder if the subject would be too emotional for some - good luck in FJ's contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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