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My Old Oak Tree-A Poem Time Forgot Contest

A Poem That Time Forgot Contest Sponsor: Silent One MY OLD OAK TREE I whispered to the breeze, “Don't make a mess out of me”, As the tiny leaves danced, Falling off the old oak tree. I heard him answer in chyme, “All good things come in time, Follow me to the sky”, So I got up and started to climb. So I went up as far as I could, For this was strong oak wood, But my breath sped up, And up there I just stood. Too far to jump, too low to soar, I thought I might explore, Decided to take the scenic route, And try harder than before. See, I've been up that tree, Too cloudy to really see, I wanted to jump off, Fly and be blissfully free. So I shouted louder than silence, I was searching for pure guidance, I was too lost and too blind, To feel the dramatic science. Now it's just one foot down, Try not to make a sound, Do my very best, To not fall on the ground. Written: October 23, 2009 Date Posted: September 28, 2015

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Date: 11/28/2015 1:41:00 PM
Love the poem Laura,, congrats on your win. SKAT
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/28/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thank you SKAT!!! You are the best...
Date: 11/27/2015 12:45:00 PM
A lovely write, Laura! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/28/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Kim! -lu *smiles*
Date: 11/27/2015 7:34:00 AM
Lovely, my wife loves to climb trees so I relate to this one. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/27/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thank you Richard very much! -lu *smiles*
Date: 11/26/2015 11:13:00 AM
Laura, that it is a beautiful write! congrats!
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Date: 11/27/2015 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Balveen! -lu *smiles*
Date: 11/26/2015 3:27:00 AM
Congrats on ur win with this poem Laura.. great work!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/27/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thank you! Be blessed :)- LU *smiles*
Date: 11/26/2015 1:10:00 AM
Congrats on the win with this great Poem Laura...hugs
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Date: 11/26/2015 12:35:00 PM
Thank you very much!!! *Smiles*
Date: 11/25/2015 6:11:00 PM
Very nicely written, congrats on your win. JDH
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/25/2015 6:15:00 PM
Thank you John :)-lu *smiles*

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