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My Message In the Bottle

i have given just about all that i could give as a poet through this one page i live one last line for you dear reader read it carefully and you will find that my treasures are forever mine not material but found in my lines

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/19/2012 8:58:00 AM

Almost an ETHEREE... I love the uninterrupted flow from line to line. The pride you feel is palpable!! Well done, my friend.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/2/2012 8:02:00 AM

Every poet's words are one's precious treasure... Agreed, The Situation.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/15/2012 8:30:00 AM

You always have a treasure to find in your lines. Love to read and absorb some of your depths my friend. :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/8/2011 8:18:00 PM

and you can keep up too. jhl

Leonard Taormina

Date: 4/10/2011 6:02:00 PM

excellent write and my thanks to you for it

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/6/2011 2:17:00 PM

Glad to have read your message in the bottle poem. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2011 11:23:00 AM

The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today T.S. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2011 7:53:00 AM

Very nicely put. Go reread the contest though. YOu have to do certain things to place! (read it carefully)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 4:48:00 PM

Quite a profound approach to the contest, T.S. I think you'll do well with this unique approach. Enjoyed very much! (I wasn't the "class clown," just weird.) Love, Carolyn