My Message In the Bottle

i have given just about all that i could give
as a poet through this one page i live
one last line for you dear reader
read it carefully and you will
find that my treasures
are forever mine
not material
but found
in my
lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/19/2012 8:58:00 AM
Almost an ETHEREE... I love the uninterrupted flow from line to line. The pride you feel is palpable!! Well done, my friend.
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Date: 2/2/2012 8:02:00 AM
Every poet's words are one's precious treasure... Agreed, The Situation.
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Date: 1/15/2012 8:30:00 AM
You always have a treasure to find in your lines. Love to read and absorb some of your depths my friend. :)
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:18:00 PM
and you can keep up too. jhl
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:02:00 PM
excellent write and my thanks to you for it
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:17:00 PM
Glad to have read your message in the bottle poem. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/4/2011 11:23:00 AM
The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today T.S. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 7:53:00 AM
Very nicely put. Go reread the contest though. YOu have to do certain things to place! (read it carefully)
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Date: 3/3/2011 4:48:00 PM
Quite a profound approach to the contest, T.S. I think you'll do well with this unique approach. Enjoyed very much! (I wasn't the "class clown," just weird.) Love, Carolyn
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