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My Loving Man

My heart’s never felt so alive snuggled close to my loving man. Held in his arms where passions thrive my heart’s never felt so alive. Treated like the queen of the hive he gives me all the love he can. My heart’s never felt so alive snuggled close to my loving man. He gives me all the love he can my heart’s never felt so alive. With him my happiness began he gives me all the love he can. My staunchest friend and biggest fan he’s the reason my dreams survive. He gives me all the love he can, my heart’s never felt so alive. (Intertwining Triolet) 4/26/2015

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Date: 5/19/2015 2:39:00 PM
It's a very gentle triolet served well by the repetition necessary in following the form. A 7 from me, Emile... Julia, :)
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Date: 5/19/2015 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Julia, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/27/2015 2:55:00 PM
Poetry as it should be! très beau poème
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:48:00 PM
Thanks again Etienne, I'm pleased your visit was a pleasurable one. Emile.
Date: 4/26/2015 5:42:00 PM
Emile, you have style and grace, and this flows onto every line you compose!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/27/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Arthur, what a nice thing to say. Emile.
Date: 4/26/2015 2:27:00 PM
An amazing and beautiful love poem
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/27/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/26/2015 12:42:00 PM
I love this! It makes me want to write a triolet!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/26/2015 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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