My Love - a Zejel

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(A Zejel) I look at you and want you more You're the only one I adore With you my heart inside just soar All things may come and then just go But your love in me always grow You have a way to touch me so From me love for you just pours Love has a way always to heal Love for you is as strong as steel Can't help this love for you I feel And know there's more beyond this shore Your lips like sweet honey to me With you I always want to be And in my heart you hold the key I look at you and want you more. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,05,2014 nice pic enclosed if you open the window for notes

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/6/2014 2:17:00 PM

dazzling beautiful pen dorian flowing golden ink sang from the picture excellent piece

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/16/2014 3:32:00 PM

Liam my dear friend thank you so much for stopping by and such a beautiful comment. :) Love and Hugs! xxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/5/2014 8:15:00 PM

How beautiful...I am a sucker for romance...hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/5/2014 9:07:00 PM

I am too Tim! Lol.... Love can either take you high or bring you down. That's why we have to be very careful to whom we give our hearts and affections. Thank you for the visit my dear friend. :) Hugs! Xxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2014 4:15:00 PM

such wonderful imagery and I love the rhyme scheme - not seen this form before Dorian - you do inspire me so! Hugs Jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/5/2014 9:02:00 PM

Thank you Jan for your very nice comment. This form and hundred more...can be found in many poetry sites in the web. Search thru Google....Thanks for the compliment dear friend. :) I feel very humbled and honored by it. :) love and hugs!xxxx D.

David Meade

Date: 11/5/2014 3:16:00 PM

I love the A Zejel style - your use of heart, love, steel, and honey gives the poem the sweetness with strength to captive the imagination . . . it did with me. Nicely done.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/5/2014 8:32:00 PM

Thank you, for your very wonderful comment, David! Best to you! :) Xxxx D.