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When I Died

When I died a queen in ancient Egypt it was the custom, To entomb the powerful with all their earthly wealth; On the walls of my tomb were paintings depicting my journey, The entrance to my vast tomb was sealed with a scared carving. In hieroglyphs it warned of my magical and demonic powers, In pictures and symbols the writing told of my dark secret; The seal of my tomb was to never be broken- the writing stated clearly, Tomb invaders could not understand the puzzle writing of hieroglyphs. They broke the seal and entered my resting place with awe, Touching all my sacred things and filled their bags with gold; Casting aside the sheets of papyrus on which my funeral text was written, My coffin was opened- it was silent in the tomb as light touched the walls. The invaders did not respect the dead it seemed and I was angry, They were excited with rummaging and did not notice the air; That changed with electricity and I rose a hologram of the queen I was, And with me came my beloved leopards who killed the invaders quickly. We left my tomb- beautiful holograms of evil to exist again . . . ____________________________ May 1, 2016 Poetry/Verse/When I Died Copyright Protected, ID 784-551-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Any Poem You Wrote This Year 2016, sponsor, Skat Fifth Place

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Date: 6/15/2016 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations Broken, thanks for the entry. Skat
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Date: 6/12/2016 7:00:00 PM
what a magical story you weave with this lovely piece dear Constance, Love it, congrats on your win
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Date: 6/12/2016 4:50:00 PM
wow, you took it to the dark side, Constance How did I ever miss this gem. BIG congrats on your win!! (how are you? Miss you today!)
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Date: 5/4/2016 7:45:00 PM
Hi Constance, another excellent write. Best wishes in the contest. A most creative write on the theme. Ancient Egypt, one of my favourite periods of ancient history. You have told your tale of the Hieroglyphs and Holograms and you have told it most creatively. This is a definite seven Constance and it goes into my faves.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/5/2016 11:22:00 AM
Mike thanks for visiting and for the nice comment and fav
Date: 5/4/2016 5:11:00 PM
Interesting read, Constance. Enjpyed very much, Luck in contest! Have been keeping literary journal (not with the Soup). Sorry jhave not been around lately.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/5/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thomas nice to hear from you and thanks for the comment on my poem
Date: 5/3/2016 11:24:00 AM
Scary story BW, mysterious and entertaining.
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:12:00 PM
James, thanks for the visit, well you know me and my muse, we are on fire ~
Date: 5/2/2016 2:24:00 PM
I doubt very much that we have any less respect for the dead now! I heard someone say that, "we hoard our dead"! What an odd thought! I think we rather miss them. So, if nothing else, it's disrespect for our memories; all that we have of the person. Yet in 1000 year,s the Energy goes somewhere...so don't mess with it! Ha! Fun personification of the person, history, and situation! <3
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Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2016 5:48:00 PM
Edlynn, thanks for visiting and the comment ~

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