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My Last Good-Bye

It happened to me one night – when I was coming home late from work; The police report said he ran a red light – going 80, some drunken jerk. I didn’t know just what hit me – I didn’t experience any hurt or pain; Just a moment of instant recognition – that my life had met its end. I floated around in darkness – hearing a beeping in my head; Sensing that you were near me – lying vigil by my bed. They gave you a medical explanation – for the tears upon my face, But you knew that I was crying – being stuck in this unconscious place. My body needed to release me – but my soul didn’t want to go; I had gone to work that morning – without telling you I loved you so. They said it was a reflexive action – squeezing your hand at the flat line, But it was me saying my last good-bye – and, I love you, one more time. Please don’t you grieve too long – you have plenty of life left to live; And it really is okay – to find somebody else your love to give. And when you do, don’t make the mistake – that I made on that fatal day, Before leaving the house each morning – “I love you”, is what you should say.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/16/2012 6:21:00 PM
Wonderful sad write......these are definitely words to live by!
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joe in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 12:59:00 PM
Powerful write with a great lesson for all! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:05:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting such luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday with lots of luv..my friend..
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:01:00 AM
Joe, we should never forget to tell those who are dear to us how much we love them. We never know when it will be our last chance. Congratulations on your win with this excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:41:00 AM
THE CONTEST IS OVER AND YOU ARE THE WINNER..SARA
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Date: 11/6/2010 4:21:00 PM
Joe, I thank you for supporting my contest with your wonderful Rhyme that tells a heart touching story of how we take our love ones for granted..forgetting the little things that mean a whole lot. I'm glad that this is not true..Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations Joe on your worthy win in the top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win,Joe
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Date: 9/8/2010 10:21:00 AM
A stark reminder of the importance of the words "I love you" moving poetry Joe, much enjoyed, thanks Wilma
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Date: 9/3/2010 5:04:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 9/3/2010 8:37:00 AM
sweet poem
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Date: 9/3/2010 7:41:00 AM
This is a really good poem i liked it alot
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