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My In-Law

He rolls like baby Playing hearts like he's ready To lose his deary Your bro not that boy Played my heart like it's a toy You're pain, he's a joy My brother-in-law If no heart wants you, then how? Grow up will you now! Prima Minardi (05/19/2011) For '***IN-LAWS***' contest By Dr. Ram Mehta

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 8:37:00 PM

Hey, I am just now seeing your in-law poem and that you won. WAY to go. a very belated congratulations to you. I see you don't like your brother in law? What about your mother in law?

John Freeman

Date: 6/8/2011 8:21:00 PM

Prima, good to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/8/2011 10:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Prima. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/7/2011 9:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest, Prima ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2011 3:57:00 PM

congrats Prima on your exciting win in Dr. Ram's contest on in laws with this fabulous entry my friend.. super cool..enjoy another great win with luv.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2011 3:23:00 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in my contest, Prima

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/30/2011 2:15:00 PM

Hi Prima- Such childish behavior from your in law in this entry. The last line is peachy keen--Grow up will you now. How perfect an ending for your in law! Have a blessed Memorial Day. Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2011 3:37:00 AM

impressive insight about the role of in-laws in your life, prima.. this is so original... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/23/2011 8:48:00 PM

I wonder if men ever grow up Prima.. your lines are so cool and expressive ..good luck in the contest luv.. super write..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/23/2011 3:30:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Prima