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My Heavenly Journey, Pt. Ii

Part II I thought of Jesus’ Ascension into Heaven and the Passover. There were beautiful fields of green clover. I was so amazed. Was I loosing my mind? There were animals running free, of every kind. Even lions, tigers and bears! The sight of them gave me quite a scare. My guide smiled, sensing my fear. He said, “No worries- no meat- eating animals here.” There were no “houses”, but many mansions of great size. As Jesus promised, this was surely paradise! I was just in awe. Especially when there, with flowing black hair, stood my Grandma! There was so much joy on her face. I ran into her warm embrace. She wiped my tears. Her voice was music to my ears. She said, “Don’t fear eternity. When you time comes, I want you here with me!” I smiled and shook my head. She kissed my cheek and walked on ahead. Oh, how bad I wanted to stay - right then. But, I knew my own journey had just begun. I knew I would see this magnificent place again. This memorable journey reminded me of my sins. I knew I had to look deep inside me. Suddenly, I was back to earth, inside my body. I had a burning desire to now focus on my spirituality; If I was to one day make that Heavenly Journey!! * Entry for Matt Caliri’s Contest- “The Journey”

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Date: 4/25/2010 1:57:00 PM
Amazing...I loved the whole story... -Destiny
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Date: 4/5/2010 8:36:00 AM
Awesome story from start to finish Jimmy. At the end of this life begins a new one, that puts this one to shame.Smile! Knowledge often leads now, but then Wisdom of Agape will lead without fault. Thanks again for your comments. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/3/2010 3:48:00 PM
Great journey write that should do well in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks fo the comments.Sara
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Date: 4/3/2010 2:44:00 PM
An amazing poem, JAM...there are many journeys you're going on including the journey as a poet..you are ahead in the game, love..keep moving in that direction.., Much love to you...always, Peanut butter.
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:54:00 PM
You have really grown as a poet, it is amazing, your poetry is powerful and well written.. best of luck in the contest.. love Constance
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