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''My Hearts, Whispering Bliss''

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Love is my hearts essence, shining, Our love is perfect like a dream; Walking hand in hand by a stream. And my heart speaks of love burning, The shadows folding around us; Our kisses and words like stardust. Without love, life is not living, The love within us is immortal; The passion is unchangeable. Love for us is never fading, Slowly, silently, now the moon; The dawn dim, that rose far to soon. I rest in his arms, trembling, Words of love falling from my lips; Tears from my hearts, whispering bliss. Love is my hearts essence, shining, And my heart speaks of love burning; Without love, life is not living, I rest in his arms, trembling. _____________________________ August 26, 2012 Poetry/Constanza/"My Hearts, Whispering Bliss" Copyright Protected, ID 12-741-364-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 1/6/2016 1:18:00 AM
Now this is a love poem. That's the great thing about the soup is being able to read and learn from such talented writers. I appreciated your kind visit and I'm even more pleased I read this gem. : )
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Date: 1/6/2016 3:12:00 AM
Mark, thanks for the nice comment and the compliment, appreciate
Date: 1/5/2016 2:29:00 AM
Wow Constance.. love in every stanza deepening.. last line amazingly beautiful!!
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:04:00 AM
Upma, oh thanks for the wow, the amazing and the beautiful !
Date: 1/4/2016 2:20:00 PM
Wow, Broken Wings....This is superb. You caught the essence of love so well in these lines. I do love the Constanza form. I've written in it once. Good luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 3:31:00 PM
Eileen thanks for the wow and the superb and the visit ~

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