My God's Awesome Wonder

Are my Dreams reality or is Reality my dream //  Dreams, reality                 / Dreams
As I slumber in the Ebony Valley Of Death // Ebony valley of Death  / Ebony  death
Hear Heaven's Hymns,Hell Screams      //Heaven's hymns,Hell Screams   /Hell screams
                                          To be Contiued
                                 Dedicated to Yoni Dvorkis

Typers Note - Yoni several years ago you asked Chef why he used so many Capitol letters. I too had asked him, yesterday he told me why. In most instantses the capitols
are another Poem inside the Poem as above. If the first word of the line is part of the  Poem the whole word is Capitolized. This Poem = a Haiku and another Poem. There are 5
Hiaku in this Poem when it is done. I will send you the whole poem(s)
I wrote you a Soup mail with the rest of this poem(s). Respectfully Yours, Kenny A Fledgling Poet

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2013 10:46:00 PM

hmmm, this looks like it was written by the guy who was using your account at one time? I don't really know what this is talking about. I'm not good with codes!!! Hope you are having a good day, HG!! Luv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/23/2013 9:48:00 AM

This is an interesting way to write and I guess I never thought about why you did some in capital letters. You are our devinci of poetry soup. lol. Hope you are having a wonderful day. Our weather has warmed up today so will be a good day to go out shopping. The sun is trying to peek thru-we have had such a long dreary winter when we usually have cold but sunshine. Thanks for reading my poem. love phyl

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 1/20/2013 6:52:00 AM

Hi Chef. Feel free to soup mail me the full version. I'm interested to see what you have going here. Capital letters imply a sense of subservience to a higher knowledge of Good, not evil. evil is only in the mind where it must be undone. Nice to hear for you HGarvey. -Yoni