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My Friend, Red-Tail Hawk

Once long ago he flew high and free The flight was farther than most can see Then one day as I watched him in his flight Close to evening when it was getting dim light Seeing him in the dim light there was a change Feathers flew__he pitched and turned seemed strange Slowly falling to mother earth landed in lurch Going close so I could maybe see if he was hurt He was on the ground with feathers all around Swiftly going home and getting a bag to cover him round Took him to a rescue ranch to see if he had a chance He would heal the all seem to feel, on his perch he had stance But he did not heal__ his psyche was permanently crushed He longingly viewed the sky remembering when he flew freed Stuck on his perch he grew swiftly old no more freedom no more gold Hating each day but not able to go on with his goal Dreaming, night dreams and day dreams to fly high again To soar with the eagles up in the night sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/7/2010 8:48:00 AM
congrats on the feature poem and enjoyed reading your work!!
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Sara. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 11:16:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..AlohA Land...
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Date: 7/5/2010 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 8:42:00 AM
Aha! An animal lover after my own heart. I feed hundreds of little ones each day in my back yard. Included are a bunch of stray cats. I somehow hope no one takes them in. They have the whole out of doors for their investigtation - live free. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:21:00 AM
Wow - what a fabulous write. Many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:39:00 PM
A lovely poem to be featured, Sara. This was a lovely written poem for the plight of the hawk! Well done. ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:17:00 AM
A vivid and well written poem, Sara, even though it tells of the sad plight of a flightless red-tailed hawk. The paradox of once having known the glory of flight, and the ignominy of never again soaring in the sky make this a deeply touching poem. Carl.
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:42:00 PM
This is a very touching piece of poem. I like the theme and how it flows through the poem. The essence of the words also speaks to humanity. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:55:00 PM
If this is true, it is sad. I winced as I read it but the ending provided uplifting thoughts, ( sic.) I take it that this really happened to you?! You have a noble heart. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:25:00 PM
Wonderful write and so sad but very brilliant Sara.. enjoyed your creativity tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..luv..
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Date: 6/28/2010 6:11:00 PM
I enjoyed the last couplet.
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Date: 6/28/2010 4:34:00 PM
Ah...sad poem! I love the majesty of the Eagle and the hawk. They really do belong free, so it is sad when one cannot after an injury.
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