My Forever Love

“Ah!  Good Morning, Glad to see YOU :  Happy Valentine’s Day
  I’m off to find my Heartbeats LOVE : will YOU guide me on the way?
  I’ve ne’er been down the path of LOVE, I’ve ne’er been on this Trail
 I’ll walk across the brilliant Rainbows : Stand upon the Sunsets : Pale ::
Against Your illuminating Beauty, Gleaming LOVE ; outshining the Sun
While the Beauty of Mother Nature Cries ; for She knows Her reign is Done
The Tapestry of Her Splendor ; Kaleidoscopic hues of each season of the Year
I console Mother Nature assuring Her beauty lives Forever, as I wipe away HER TEAR
A fork in the Path, now what do I do; to the right there’s a Light, left there’s no view
Onward My Heart Pulsates toward a Voice as a mythical Siren : Mystically calls me
I am close I can feel the Heat of LOVE, from a distant she’s watching Me
As I round the Finally bend, She faces the sun “ Haloed “ by Glorious Sunbeams
Turning Around, in a Golden Gown , her Piercing Forest Earthen Eyes  the Dreams::
I dreamt since Youth ; A reality of Beauty has come to me with her Heavenly Charms
                         HAPPY VALENTINES DAY : BARBARA JEAN 
 I will ALWAYS LOVE YOU, Kiss YOU,  Hug  YOU; FOREVER hold YOU in my Arms

Dedicated to Barbara Jean Gorlick For Valentine's Day and ETERNITY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/22/2010 6:27:00 PM
WOW! That is a beautiful Valentine poem for your sweetheart. The imagery and the wording are superb. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/18/2010 10:10:00 AM
This is so exhuberating, it is WONDERFUL! I've never read your work before, definitely a specialness to find the one who brings these emotions and light to sensuals of life and livlihood...Congrats to both... Miss Cindy
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Date: 2/15/2010 9:36:00 PM
wow, that is a GREAT valentine. YOu are truly a romantic, HG! Luv ya, Andrea
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:04:00 PM
Thankxxx my Silent Beau for your precious and special comments on my poetry tonight.. hope sharing with each other gives better insight into talent and gifts given to us by the MASTER .... always enjoy your poetry reads too... u are too kind HG ... that is why I luv u dearly... luv.. your "Sweetheart" forever..
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Date: 2/14/2010 2:36:00 PM
Nice dedication to a wonderful person...Beautiful..Charma
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Date: 2/14/2010 10:19:00 AM
This is Beautiful. and again, very kind with all of your dedications<: and i wouldn't mind being your valentine, to a great friend. happy Valentine's Day to you too! -Always Lynn
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:16:00 AM
A magnificent write and wonderful loving tribute to a special lady BG is one...for sure... full of emotion and depth of loving ... a special Valentine indeed between two special people.. thankxxx for the CROWN and for your support and luv on my poetry reads... so appreciated ...more than u can imagine or will ever know.. u are my inspiration to continue on... hugs and kisses to my always and forever Silent Beau.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/14/2010 12:37:00 AM
Beautiful poem, thanks
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Date: 2/13/2010 10:58:00 PM
You have written words from your heart, I can feel a pure romance here, what a lucky lady to receive such a talented verse here, HGarvey Daniel. Nice reading this. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/13/2010 10:44:00 PM
very lovely poem...well...cause...it's full of love!
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Date: 2/13/2010 10:02:00 PM
Very nice dedication...love your poem...enjoyed...Marty
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