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My Destiny - A Traditional Cinquain

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My Destiny - A Traditional Cinquain

.                                                       Daughter
                                                       My miracle
                                                  Separated at birth
                                          I was lost until you found me


                                                 Written:  May 14, 2011

                              Dedicated to my  beautiful, precious daughter

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  1. Date: 2/20/2014 2:53:00 PM
    You broke my heart and put it back together all in 14 words. My daughters are my life; I'm glad you have yours. Touching and beautiful Elaine.

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 4:29:00 PM
    Beautiful write to your daughter, it's so lovely. Thank you kindly for reading me Elaine :)

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 10:32:00 PM
    Beautiful. Just brings goosebumps when I read this one! Lee

  1. Date: 6/30/2011 10:35:00 PM
    I had to see this one because it is the same title that I used in my entry for the river contest (an oldie of mine) anyway, this is so beautiful, and I seem to remember you telling me about our daughter in the past. LOVE it.

  1. Date: 6/6/2011 8:12:00 AM
    A wonderful tribute. It's hard to believe you could sum up such powerful emotions in just a few words, but you did and it's lovely. thank you for sharing this with us.

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 2:29:00 PM
    A lovely dedication and perfect lines to express the luv u have for your precious daughter Lainie.. not only are your poetic words so magnificent my friend but your words of comment are both wise and so very welcome ... they have lifted my spirits soaring to new heights as my intention was .. and shall ever be.. to be a light on PS. and in the World of darkness... thankxx for being a great and special friend always luv..

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 9:08:00 PM
    How wonderful for your daughter. And what a cute name she has, Lainie!

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 3:12:00 PM
    Very touching and loving work..Enjoyed reading this eve..I can't imagine the pain a mother would feel being separated from their child when they are young...Very gracious and loving write...Thanks for the comments on my blog..Our Rocky was 14 1/2 years old..He had an enlarged heart and heart failure...Sara

  1. Date: 5/16/2011 1:25:00 PM
    So touching, Lainie. Did this really happen? We often hear of children finding their mothers later in life -- it rings of truth. Wonderful triute to Charlee! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/15/2011 5:20:00 AM
    What a fine dedication to a daughter by a mother, Elaine