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My Definition of Love

I inhale your existence I can feel you without touch Somehow that is strange to me Collide into red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/17/2011 9:34:00 PM
This is a reasonably well written dodoitsu. You have chosen a good selection of words to include here.
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:21:00 PM
knowing feelings. jhl
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:15:00 PM
NICE MEANING *LUV ~SKAT
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Date: 2/3/2011 10:04:00 AM
Exotic reaction. Must be ifatuation. Like this one mucho. Daver
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Date: 2/2/2011 6:15:00 PM
very spiritual type of definition of love, kristen. enjoyed the write
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:52:00 AM
Excellent entry Kristen.. and good luck with this definitive entry luv..
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Date: 2/2/2011 12:11:00 AM
Just adore those first two lines! Cool collision on the end too! I bet this scores high!!
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:53:00 PM
Really like the way this reads...love,Deb
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:04:00 PM
how charming and enrgetic, kristen... like tour last line! winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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