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My Crashing Heart

How can you hold back Sun When it is casting its light On a golden field fertilizing the harvest with it's zeal earth and sun makes the yield you cannot hold back what i feel How can you hold the Ocean As it clears the beaches Of their Sand Castles with every high tide i take my breath i come ashore and erase the steps no man will ever know the measure of my depths i guard secret places until there is the one that is destined to find Oh Yes, it is all by design a master plan all in one mind it is with this feeling that you are destined be mine How can I hold back my Love When wave after wave Comes crashing in heart day after day night after night in my heart and mind in you i delight my eyes dream you, hands reach for you lips kiss you with each thought of the day and as time passes my torture is made why did God make us this way? to love with intelligence and this feeling that i must make you mine writen by Vienna Bombardieri and john h loving iii

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/17/2012 12:20:00 PM
Beautiful write by both of you. love phyl now I am caught up to the new year.
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Date: 1/5/2012 1:02:00 PM
what a powerful collaboration...yes I always loved this concept....as for love is concerned i agree with u John..''.That SUx''...after screwing up the feelings...cheers !!!!!!!!! to both of u
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Date: 1/4/2012 7:42:00 PM
love the passion you both poured in this piece! gentle and rough, with raw emotions. congrats for the both of you
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Date: 1/3/2012 1:33:00 PM
Enjoyed the overall flow of this John and Vie good to read these lines..)
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Date: 1/2/2012 6:58:00 PM
Hi Jhn, you and Vie did a fantastic presentation here. Love how you bring the sun, then the ocean and wind it all up with the love part. A lot of emotion in this one. :)
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Date: 1/2/2012 4:02:00 AM
Congrats to both of you, this is wonderful poetry, so much feeling, enjoyed. happy new year. harry
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Date: 12/31/2011 4:06:00 PM
Why, indeed. I dig this big time. There was a lot of passion in these lines.
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