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my crashing heart

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my crashing heart

How can you hold back Sun
When it is casting its light
On a golden field
fertilizing the harvest
with it's zeal
earth and sun makes the yield
you cannot hold back what i feel

How can you hold the Ocean
As it clears the beaches
Of their Sand Castles
with every high tide i take my breath
i come ashore and erase the steps
no man will ever know the measure of my depths
i guard secret places until there is the one 
that is destined to find
Oh Yes, it is all by design
a master plan all in one mind
it is with this feeling that you are destined be mine

How can I hold back my Love
When wave after wave 
Comes crashing in heart
day after day night after night
in my heart and mind in you i delight
my eyes dream you, hands reach for you
lips kiss you with each thought of the day
and as time passes my torture is made
why did God make us this way? to love with intelligence
and this feeling that i must make you mine



writen by Vienna Bombardieri and john h loving iii

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  1. Date: 1/17/2012 12:20:00 PM
    Beautiful write by both of you. love phyl now I am caught up to the new year.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 11:20:00 AM
    Its a lovely write,John.Everything which involves Viennas`participation must end up with a lovely result.Her aura shows us pure love and kindness.You guys have done a beautiful ballad here! And thanks for your latest comment John.It must be one of the finest I`ve ever recived.Bless you John

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 1:02:00 PM
    what a powerful collaboration...yes I always loved this concept....as for love is concerned i agree with u John..''.That SUx''...after screwing up the feelings...cheers !!!!!!!!! to both of u

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 7:42:00 PM
    love the passion you both poured in this piece! gentle and rough, with raw emotions. congrats for the both of you

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 5:16:00 PM
    Beautiful piece, you and Vienna did a wonderful job writing this together...luv shannon

  1. Date: 1/3/2012 1:33:00 PM
    Enjoyed the overall flow of this John and Vie good to read these lines..)

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 6:58:00 PM
    Hi Jhn, you and Vie did a fantastic presentation here. Love how you bring the sun, then the ocean and wind it all up with the love part. A lot of emotion in this one. :)

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 4:02:00 AM
    Congrats to both of you, this is wonderful poetry, so much feeling, enjoyed. happy new year. harry

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 4:06:00 PM
    Why, indeed. I dig this big time. There was a lot of passion in these lines.

  1. Date: 12/31/2011 12:49:00 PM
    You have done a wonderful job John, enjoyed the extension, Blessings are being sent your way, hugs, vie