Ouch

Half-blind Billy hunts for hot chicks and drools for big tall girls, his picks. But grabbing a gal— turns out it was Hal— got Billy jaw-busting hard licks. written October 7, 2016

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Sandra Haight

Date: 10/13/2016 7:14:00 PM

Janice, congratulations on your fine placement on the winner's list! Hugs, Sandra

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 7:20:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice

Lu Loo

Date: 10/13/2016 10:46:00 AM

very cute Janice! Congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 11:29:00 AM

Thanks so much, Luloo! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/13/2016 7:30:00 AM

Congrats!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 7:54:00 AM

Thanks, Kim! Janice

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/13/2016 7:12:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 7:54:00 AM

Thanks, Agnes! Janice

Tony Devers

Date: 10/13/2016 3:45:00 AM

Ouch! Nice punchline. Billy's not Donald Trump is he?

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 7:53:00 AM

Could be Trump, couldn't he?! Thanks, Tony. Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2016 2:31:00 AM

I REALLY loved this one Janice! Many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 7:52:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan! Janice

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 10/12/2016 11:47:00 PM

Well done on your well deserved placement Janice Mark

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 7:51:00 AM

Thanks, Mark! Janice

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/12/2016 11:34:00 PM

Hi Janice, This is funny! Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/13/2016 7:51:00 AM

Thank, Alexis! Janice

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/12/2016 10:05:00 PM

Congrats, Janice, you caught me out- I thought this was written by someone like John Wulf's style . Well done! Viv

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/12/2016 10:09:00 PM

Viv, thank you so much for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem! Janice

John Lawless

Date: 10/8/2016 7:16:00 AM

Well, Janice, the "double-entendre" of the final line is .....well anyway this is one great limerick....

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/8/2016 9:08:00 AM

Thanks so much, John! Janice

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/7/2016 5:55:00 PM

Nice.... very nice

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/7/2016 8:07:00 PM

Thanks so much, Pashang! Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2016 4:58:00 PM

hilarious! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/7/2016 8:07:00 PM

Jan, thank you so much! Janice

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/7/2016 1:30:00 PM

Janice, this one really made me laugh out loud. Extremely funny limerick!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/7/2016 1:32:00 PM

Daniel, thank you so much! You are very supportive. Janice

Chris Green

Date: 10/7/2016 1:23:00 PM

Ha, that's funny. Nicely done surprise ending. :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/7/2016 1:33:00 PM

Thanks so much, Chris! Janice