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My Brother the Soilder

crimson soilder- such a beautiful life on the line. how far does obligation go over and over? You step up, my brave fire bird. If you left me here today I would always remember you... the strong one. Reality i can not change- the world is falling apart, I try and not take it so badly for i know that you; and many others like you fight for my freedom. (such a selfless, nobel act) for a country that does not care. I wish I had half your strength- thus, through your spirit I am free. May you always fly at Gods' speed to get you back home to us all. until than we will await your arrival forever and ever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/13/2011 5:01:00 PM
very touching, love the feelin it creates in the reader's heart.
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Date: 10/13/2011 4:11:00 PM
A touching tribute to a brave loved one.
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