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My Body, Your Canvas

with every stroke an artist brings his canvas alive, with each stroke you bring me alive, yearning for more than just a mere stroke...

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2013 8:38:00 PM

revisiting this sexy one. I may have to start seeing your oldies from the very beginning. I think I have seen them all because I click on many of them and see my old comments there!!

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/3/2010 2:18:00 AM

You have a wonderful way of conveying sensuality and more.... in just so few words.Great Tanka.As with all you write,I loved it,Thank you Wilma. Love June(sylvia)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2010 10:15:00 PM

oooh la la, this one is even better. Nice sexy write, Wilma. Love bug has really gotten you. LUv, Andrea

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 11/1/2010 6:11:00 PM

Wilma? Naughty... but nice. You shouldn't kiss and tell. Now I'll have to let them know that else you like :-)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2010 8:19:00 AM

Oh, I can feel the passion simmering in this poem, Wilma. "A mere stroke" only makes us hunger for more! Great poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/31/2010 7:23:00 AM

You see Wilma, I had to do a long poem to bring out my complete thoughts. What you have done here, is to say it all in a few words. Very rich words indeed! Thanks so much for your comments and your best wishes. Luv, Joy (Jew)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/31/2010 4:36:00 AM

Oh yes dear friend Wilma.. u have captured exactly the passion and intensity of romance in your wonderful write today.. luv the stokes of the brush on the body canvas... hot ...luv.. enjoy your Halloween Sunday ..with luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2010 3:33:00 PM

Very passionate...Rated mature..Risque..I may not should be here..Sara

Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/30/2010 12:39:00 PM

Great Tanka, Wilma. Selectively Provacative

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/30/2010 12:31:00 PM

Steamy and passionate, Wilma!! Your on the roll..again..dear friend!! :) Glad you're a little bit free to do what you love..writing these wonderful verses!! Have a lovely evening and a great tomorrow! Love, Audrey

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/30/2010 12:20:00 PM

WOW wilma, wish had the paint brush in my hand for this work of art... beautiful Tanka..Love Michael

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 10/30/2010 10:43:00 AM

Wilma~ Now that's body art, I enjoyed your passionate moment! Keep writing your wonderful words! Laura :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/30/2010 9:19:00 AM

Very passionate indeed! Your halloween costume comes in body paint? ooh wow...;) -- I believe your Muse is actually more inspired than mine ;) & take your time with mail :) hugs back to you

De R

Date: 10/30/2010 9:06:00 AM

Very passionate, Wilma..great tanka:)