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My Being

my being my existence in a world that is flawed my business my acceptance to a merciful god my voice my face my poetry my weight my sickness my fate my memories my treasury of the past all those relations that did'nt last my family above and below my friends and my soul my woman which woman is she alive or dead yes i have a being when i'm finished being alive a metaphysical being in a world unflawed my heaven my acceptance from a merciful God

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Date: 9/14/2012 1:38:00 PM
Well, I really like this poem; However, my theories about the afterlife, if indeed there is one differ from the traditional. Great write!!! TC
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Date: 6/7/2012 1:13:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading some of your poems. This one is just awesome. Love it!!!
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Date: 1/17/2012 12:02:00 PM
A thought provoking write and questions that roll around in our minds. I like it. love phyl
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:01:00 PM
Deep and wonderful John, it shines in the dark!
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Date: 11/13/2011 6:32:00 AM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:53:00 PM
I think you did splendidly for this challenge on "being!" good luck in the contest. Nothing came to me for this one.
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Date: 11/8/2011 10:33:00 AM
My honor to give you high praises for such a wonderful way with the pen. ;)
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