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my being

my being my existence
in a world that is flawed
my business my acceptance
to a merciful god
my voice my face
my poetry my weight
my sickness my fate
my memories my treasury of the past
all those relations that did'nt last
my family above and below
my friends and my soul
my woman which woman
is she alive or dead
yes i have a being 
when i'm finished being alive
a metaphysical being
in a world unflawed
my heaven my acceptance 
from a merciful God

Copyright © John Loving III

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  1. Date: 9/14/2012 1:38:00 PM
    Well, I really like this poem; However, my theories about the afterlife, if indeed there is one differ from the traditional. Great write!!! TC

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 1:13:00 PM
    I really enjoyed reading some of your poems. This one is just awesome. Love it!!!

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 12:02:00 PM
    A thought provoking write and questions that roll around in our minds. I like it. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 6:01:00 PM
    Deep and wonderful John, it shines in the dark!

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 6:32:00 AM
    Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:53:00 PM
    I think you did splendidly for this challenge on "being!" good luck in the contest. Nothing came to me for this one.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 10:33:00 AM
    My honor to give you high praises for such a wonderful way with the pen. ;)