Get Your Premium Membership

My Astonishing Love

I cannot begin to expound this breathtaking damsel Grossly beyond definition, synonymous to a priceless parcel An embodiment of perfection, fashioned with the master pencil Dominator of her peers, born to exceed the greatest counsel A baron to beauty, the synopsis of impressing Her face, so precious a crystal, immoderately dazzling Her eye's like a sunrise at twilight, stunning and mystifying Her voice, sonorous and mystique, fabulous and arresting She's a masterpiece, kick-starting the hearts of many at toll Features actions that dance to the hidden language of the soul Her words are like rain drops, piercing into the fabrics of minds, modifying roles And her love, the humiliating wonder that I shall continue to extol Instantaneously, she could be an inane trouble maker A complete and elaborate example of a truculent overtaker Unleashing the influx of a pestering disorder Still, her heart vociferously overrules the purest of waters She's my invaluable jewel, my love for her is abundant My inevitable achievement, every other girl made redundant My incandescent comforter, I'm truly highly exuberant My incontrovertible blessing, yesterday, today, and constant

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/18/2012 3:14:00 AM
What a truly wonderful use of language in description. If I were her, I'd keep this poem forever and look at is especially when I was old and felt unloved.
Login to Reply
Nwadiogbu Avatar
Ken Nwadiogbu
Date: 6/2/2012 1:47:00 PM
Thank you Josie... Took to your advice! :D

Book: Reflection on the Important Things