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My Angel

She is my angel sent from above Sent just in time and like a dove Inspired this stubborn heart to soar Abandon my self-indulgence; such a bore She came along with absolute trust and needs Watched her grow as she planted seeds Unconditional love within me grew Groomed my heart; my regrets now few Gratitude and merit I give to my King For my angel and for mercy, both songs to sing Invaluable lessons I have learned Through her, multitude blessings I have earned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/15/2010 1:52:00 PM
Catie, Thank you for your placement of my poem in your "If I Had Just One Day To Live" contest. Thank you for taking the time to sponsor the contest as well. Jerri
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations Audrey on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Angels Among Us". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2010 6:41:00 AM
Congrats Audrey BBF on your winning poem in the Angels Among Us with this awesome and amazing work of art.. so enjoy your lines my BBF .. am finally home.. loads of fun.. so much to tell.. with luv..enjoy your win and hope u will enter my Haiku contest too.. luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 9:36:00 PM
lovely, poem audrey an angel can and could be any one that helps our soul, congrats on your placement (:
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Date: 7/5/2010 2:49:00 PM
very sweet poem!!..great write!
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:13:00 PM
I love this, kinda reminds me of a piece I wrote called Disguised Angel...keep it up sis I'm always a fan *RJK
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Date: 7/2/2010 3:14:00 PM
Very good I liked your poem. I only started writing poems since my wife died in 2009 I can relate to rhyming poems better than others. As you can tell my poems rhyme. A lot of poems I don’t understand and I would hate to give a wrong comment. I want my poems to honor my wife long after I’m gone. Thank you
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:37:00 PM
Dimples, you are blessed to have such a daughter. I was very moved by the way you expressed your love for her. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:28:00 PM
beautiful trbute to your daughter!! enjoyed!
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