Mustangs Are Born Free -Monchielle

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(Monchielle) Let wild horses run free In mountains let them be Release them let them go Stop killing these horses They are so scared you know. Let wild horses run free Don't divide mom from baby Wild horses to be free Let them run in mountain Don't take freedom away. Let wild horses run free Let's join voices help horses Take them where they belong They truly need our help Selling these horses wrong. Let wild horses run free Since small I love horses I grew up watch them grow Mustangs are beautiful They're unique smart you know. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 aka ladylove copyright@2014 December,05,2014

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Perry Mcdaid

Date: 12/13/2014 6:52:00 AM

A lovely sentiment presented nicely. A monchielle, eh? Another form to try my hand at.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/13/2014 7:54:00 AM

Hi Perry! Thank you for your very kind visit and comments! Much appreciated! Oh, yes, the monchielle is one of my very favorite forms I use in a lots of my poems for years. You should try it you might like it a lot dear friend. I wish you a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/8/2014 6:53:00 AM

very beautifully painted piece dorian excellent pen dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/8/2014 10:24:00 AM

Hello Liam! Thank you so much for dropping by to visit me and for your very awesome uplifting comment! Very kind indeed, my dearest friend :) Much appreciated! I wish you a very lovely evening! And God bless you always ! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.