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Music moves.

Smooth bass tones,
they come from my heart,
the world slips from my grasp,
the only thing in my hands now are thick bass strings,
I play,
I tone life out,
I rock the world away,

Copyright © joanna smith

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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 10:39:00 PM
    I love this, associating your mood with an instrument and tone. COOL!!

  1. Date: 1/15/2013 5:32:00 PM
    Nicely done. Good poem - JH

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 2:00:00 PM
    Hell yeah!

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 10:28:00 AM
    I like this Jo, short sweet. I love music.. and thank you for your wonderful comments on mine. First time I ever shared them, I added some more. Love to hear you comments.. thanks Mike

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 9:12:00 AM
    What a love for Music which springs from the heart. Beautiful poem with great ideas to rock the world. Amazing and wonderful. Thanks for such a nice & lovely poem. And many thanks for your very unique and precious comments on my poem 'Pearl like Tears'. Your comments are like a treasure for me and can come from a beautiful mind & heart only. My good wishes and love ...Ravindra.... joanna smith

  1. Date: 2/11/2010 11:02:00 PM
    Keep rocking girl. David

  1. Date: 1/22/2010 8:47:00 AM
    Rock girl, rock > i love listening to music as i write Joanna, i enjoyed this little gem >> James

  1. Date: 1/18/2010 4:08:00 PM
    i feel this one =)

  1. Date: 1/18/2010 2:54:00 PM
    This poem moves me. Keep writing my friend!

  1. Date: 1/18/2010 9:13:00 AM
    Beautiful, your poems, especially this one are expressed so well. Great read. Rock the word away!!!!!!!!......James

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 1:58:00 PM
    Music can relax the salvage beast within. Love the approach to the topic. Thanks for the comments on my work. You have soup mail. In my poem about "Love, Lust Or Joke" it was an idea about youth wanting that man and ending up trapped by their want and other ideas that came to me on that day when I was writing. We married ladies all at one time or another feel trapped even if it is on a day when the children won't turn us aloose long enough for us to go the bathroom or put on clothes. Sara

  1. Date: 1/7/2010 10:14:00 AM
    Keep rocken!! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 1/7/2010 9:33:00 AM

  1. Date: 1/7/2010 7:57:00 AM
    Very nicely put...Marty