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Mummy.............

Love is a gift from god, And you gave it to me Kind and tender you were always; So calm like the gentle sea. How rude and naughty sometimes I was, My fault, I do regret.. I am sorry mum for hurting you I know that I'm your pet.

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/8/2009 8:44:00 AM

Crystal, you are like a demigod to me, I do not know why, I went through your comments on my poems and I feel great. Please activate your soupmail in your member area, so we could discuss more… change this poem’s form to free verse. I wrote a tribute poem for you titled “ Crystal… her noble name” send me a soupmail to reply this. I have a lot to share

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/4/2009 8:32:00 PM

Stop making me blush for her ... I love the bond ... the knit of tightness. Good write.

William Kershaw

Date: 6/4/2009 10:45:00 AM

Crystal.. When your mother reads this and she smiles through the tears in her eyes, tell her she is not alone. I cried and smiled too. You're a wonderful daughter and a better writer. Thanks for this one. Your Devoted, Will

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/3/2009 7:43:00 AM

yeah, mums must be respected like gods... but we often step on their toes