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Mrs Baker - True Story Contest

Was a dark and spooky night Was on night duty at an old hospital The ward was new to me Geriatric ladies who were poorly I ran myself  ragged answering the bells Except for one old dear who just lay there and smiled I would ask is everything  ok anything you need I am fine dear she always replied Time came  for the hand over  The day staff had arrived Went  through the names reporting  on each Til i came to Mrs Baker the staff looked perplexed Ar you sure of the name they asked in unison Of course i replied bed no 4 She's been  a sweety no trouble at all Staff they said we have no one of that name I went to the bed it was empty except For a slight indentation in the sheets I looked , they explained, Mrs Baker Had died ten years ago, was happy there Now and again she came back for a visit I hope I will meet her again. True story     Penned 17 /06/2013

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Date: 6/22/2013 5:13:00 PM
my head says no.... My heart says yes.... Congrats on your winning entry.... Love ya... Jake
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/22/2013 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Jake, listen to your heart .....Seren
Date: 6/22/2013 12:46:00 PM
Interesting story! well done! congrats! Kim
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Date: 6/22/2013 11:34:00 PM
Hi Kim and thank you ...Seren
Date: 6/22/2013 11:30:00 AM
What a lovely story. How lucky you were to meet her. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/22/2013 11:34:00 PM
Thank you Joyce .....Seren
Date: 6/22/2013 9:19:00 AM
That is so awesome that she came to visit you...you have been touched by an angel! Very sweet write. Hugs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/22/2013 11:31:00 PM
Thank You Cecilia ...Seren
Date: 6/17/2013 5:11:00 AM
spooky xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/18/2013 8:14:00 PM
Well it wasnt at the time, cos I didnt know. If it happened again it would be .

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