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Mournful, Residual Toll

Lamp shade shrouds my blanched soul Dimming, residual light o'er weary heart doth roll Flickering memories cloud my intellectual pole Obscure shadows flutter through subconscious pinhole Dusk, fading hope through my restive spirit doth stroll Encroaching darkness shutters my resolve; my psyche doth patrol Murky thoughts leaf through my sensory scroll Shimmering reflections flounder, then my inner being roil Foreboding sentiments my sanity will parole Oscillating dreams eclipse all feelings of control Loosely anchored in sinking ship; fueled by despondency's blackest coal Mournful echoes sound in waves, marooning courage on lifeless shoal Last glimmer of twilight, now must pay the woeful toll Shattered and shipwrecked brokered to misery's dole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/5/2010 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of ERyland, Stephen
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations Stephen on your win in Ryland Matthew's "My Darkest Hour" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2010 11:19:00 PM
Stephen congratulations on your placement in the contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:24:00 PM
Such beutiful and awesome images Stephen. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/27/2010 12:12:00 PM
Stephen, Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:37:00 AM
You really describe the sense of despair very well in this poem, Stephen. Many readers will be able relate to all of the feelings you described. Congratulations on your placement in Ryland's contest. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/27/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congrats Stephen on your HM in Rylands' contest with this rare beauty entry ..wonderful words so profound ..enjoy your special honor today with luv and a happy weekend too..
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Date: 11/27/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on this honorable mention in the contest, Stephen
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:32:00 AM
It is very cold here in Springfield,Ohio today. But I must say your poetry has pulled my heartstrings. Thank you for sharing it Stephen. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:31:00 PM
rhyming is awesome lol, they all end in the oll, very cool, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:49:00 AM
I really like the imagery and flow of this poem! It brings to mind my favorite poet of old for some reason, Edgar Allen Poe. Thanks for sharing!
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