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Mourn Not, Death Can Be a Gift-Collaboration

I die more wrapped in stone each day  storms batter my empty seas.  Shield broken, now red blood to pay  I dare to fight on my knees.  Death, holds its long, dark salute  where banners fallen burn.  In life, its the last savage brute  this kettle and stew I spurn.  What of skies so brightly flying by  summer's soft gentle replays. I hold on, dare I not to ever cry  time is just painful delays.  Hope once told me it was my friend.  Now I see how, it brings closer my end. Now that the cold arrested my warmth My shield has repaired my tragic youth. The kettle starts to swirl and swarm Hiding this loneliness from the truth. Above pale skies the storm retreats banners wave flying above the sunset. My stew of hatred has cried defeat Although my dying stone, I won't forget. Death, holds its long, vivid salute I have learned down on my knee's. For the pain of losing may pollute but my misery has now broken free. A friend once told me hold on to hope. The end is distant...I let go of the rope.
~Laura Loo~ collaboration ~Robert Lindley~ Thank you very much Robert for inviting me to write wonderful poetry with you! Can't wait to do it again! Date Poem Finalized : January 11, 2016

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Date: 1/14/2016 10:45:00 AM
Beautiful! Beautiful, sooooooo beautiful. #7 truly underrates this piece. Great work friend.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/14/2016 11:26:00 AM
Thank you very much Fukom, you are always so sweet :) *smiles*
Date: 1/12/2016 6:58:00 AM
Laura, I love how you presented our poem. Thanks for contributing such beautiful verses and the time you spent joining me in this composition. A pleasure to work with you my friend.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/12/2016 11:14:00 AM
I should be thanking you too buddy :) Great idea and let's do it again soon!!! Always a pleasure when I get to talk to you, or write with you!!! Many thanks again *smiles* *thanks*-luloo
Date: 1/12/2016 2:38:00 AM
wow, a most endearing collab from you and robert!.. a must-read,laura.. huggs
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:19:00 AM
the poem's beautiful Laura
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