Mountaintops

Mountaintops rise… to blot out the sun’s glare to emulate a flight into the stars. Lovers who risk the greatest of heights seize the horizon, revealing beauty under circling clouds… or smolder in rage to melt into a foggy night. The summit conceals valleys where passions ignite, then stifle the anticipation of scarlet skies… You ask how I feel…faint from vapors, faint from altitude. Never did you promise to climb the mountains together, to lift the veil, exposing morning’s transparency. If only, you would…the mountains may capture us, Love may take hold. The fire may flame in a lingering glow. If only, If only you would disclose your burning secrets and return from the brink of suffocation, despair… If only, If only… love could heal, breathe, thrive… Mountaintops may rise again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/30/2013 12:15:00 PM
love your win..... ....love <3 SKAT
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Date: 10/28/2013 8:06:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Rhonda
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Date: 10/27/2013 12:45:00 AM
This is a so nice poem friend,I enjoyed your workCongratulation on your win
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Date: 10/26/2013 9:16:00 PM
Hello Sweet Rhonda, , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17074&PoetID=18720 ------ always~ LINDA ~
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:15:00 AM
This is absolutely amazing my dear friend Rhonda. You really write so well. I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:20:00 PM
How very nice...Enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning. BG
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Date: 10/9/2013 12:10:00 PM
Passionate heights described very beautifully, Rhonda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:49:00 AM
Absolutely. When two become one, it is an unstoppable presence & force to be reckoned with. May you continue to rise. Awesome!
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful! I also like the shape of the poem. It looks cool.
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:20:00 AM
You have delighted me yet again with this enlightening write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this grandiose poem here this morning! What a powerful piece, quite the fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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