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Mortal Beings

Why is humanity filled with hardship for some? And then for others a free flowing clarity Through the years of Christianity I have now established a new view My believes of God have not changed Just the possibilities of an after life and the journey The journey of now today The reasons we choose who we are It’s no mistake or coincidence who we’ve become Or what we come here to learn And perhaps some of us don’t learn And are forced to redo it all over again We are truly brothers and sisters Mothers and daughters Husbands and wives Connected from past lives Experiencing life and its essence No matter the outcome!

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Dion Bess

Date: 5/18/2009 3:40:00 PM

this poem got alot of feelings to it i like it

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/17/2009 1:03:00 PM

Laura, It surely would be nice if we could do it all over. But what if it's a one shot deal? You know, leave the preexistence, go to earth and are tested, die, go to the spirit world and live together until judgments and then, the final judgment. I guess we have to go on faith and hope we are right. God bless you. This spiritual write is impassioned and well written. Very nice job. Love, Dane

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/16/2009 6:52:00 AM

So much thought and faith intermixed in this soft spoken poem, Laura. From a writer who has grown into one with such wise introspection. Well done! ~Carrie

P Sheart

Date: 5/15/2009 6:54:00 PM

Laura,Your beautiful heart echos what I truly feel within your words.I love your sentiments. This is a touching write. Thanks for your thoughtful sentiments on my latest Inner Whispers. You would love Alaska my friend. It's breath taking beauty is very unique.Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia